bowl fire
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Description:

Ukyo lost his parents and now he live withe his grandparents. But one day Ukyo start to see creatures and he dont know whats goin on. He meet one boys his name is Koe. He tell Ukyo 1 years later he going to die and he come too Ukyos soul. Koe give one chance to Ukyo be live longer life.Ukyo and Koe make the deal but Ukyo dont know what prices he need pay for longer life.

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Konspiracy's avatar
Konspiracy

This one is pretty cool. I like the art and the panel placements. There are a couple of grammatical errors ("definitely" is misspelled), but all in all, I like what you have going here. Maybe work on making the bodies not look so stagnant when they move? Make the people look more flowy, you know? But for the most part, excellent work.


@konspiracy
10 months ago
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Ayumi

Aww... I don't really like BL, but I like this one. And Koe's Shinigami outfit is so cool! *___*


@ayumi
8 months ago